English KS1 / KS2: How to write poetry about feelings

Poet Joseph Coelho investigates how poetry can be used to express emotions and feelings.

He explores the nuances of emotions and how we identify them in the written form, considering the ways language is used in poetry to affect the reader or engage their attention, for example: expressing emotion through personification in order to help personal developmental expression.

He aims to encourage the use of emotion in children's creative writing by exploring how to incorporate emotional, personal events into your poems.

Teacher Notes

Ideas for use in the class

Before watching:

Talk to the children about different feelings. You might have a range of feeling words available or a range of photographs that represent feelings such as happy, sad, excited, surprised, angry, lonely, afraid. Have a discussion about personal experiences of these feelings, can the children remember a specific time they have felt like this? Where were they? What were they doing? Who were they with?

Now read a poem that presents a certain feeling:

Reading list for Key Stage 1 (ages 5-7):

Lost by Michael Rosen

Reading list for Key Stage 2 (ages 7-9):

Liar by Rachel Rooney, Night Journey by Kate Wakeling, Waiting for Snow by Jennifer Watson, Gingerbread Man by Joseph Coelho

Key Stage 2 (ages 9-11):

What the teacher said when asked: What er we avin for geography, Miss? by John Agard, In the Land of Giants by George Szirtes, The Taste of a Biscuit by AF Harrold, When Granny by Valerie Bloom, Isn’t My Name Magical? by James Berry, Heights by Aoife Mannix

Next steps

Read the poem aloud and take children’s initial feedback, how is the person in the poem feeling? How do you know? Have you ever felt like this? Now re-read the poem, and look for words and phrases that exemplify the feeling in the poem.

Mark these in the text and take ideas from the children as to why they think these are effective in sharing the feeling of being lost and alone.

Now watch the clip

Ask the children to look back at the different emotions and to picture a time when they have experienced this emotion. It might help to give time, space and resources for them to be able to draw this moment in time to create a clear image of the moment.

Now encourage the children to overlay the image they have created with a piece of tracing paper upon which to write words and phrases which explore the moment and the emotions evoked. Use these words and phrases to build up a draft of a free verse poem that helps the reader to picture the moment and feel the emotions you were feeling in the moment.

Read these aloud to check for sense, meaning and flow, then present these in a scrap book anthology. Read the poems aloud and see if other children can guess the emotions evoked in the poems.

Curriculum Notes

This clip will be relevant for teaching Primary English.

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