once (too often) of the opening stanza is both echoed and refuted with
But not too often in the opening line of stanza two, which seems to contradict what he has just said.
In doing so he seems to imply that, on reflection, while this was indeed a frightening experience, it was nonetheless one he found ultimately worthwhile and enriching. We can also see this in the expression
I count as gain. He concentrates on the specific reasons he feels the encounter was beneficial in the remainder of the poem.
In choosing the word
met to describe this event, he conveys almost a sense of reciprocity and fraternity between humans and animals. It is typical of MacCaig never to assume human superiority in describing encounters with the world of nature.
The alliterative metaphor
a sea tin-tacked with rain captures with MacCaig’s usual gift of exact observation, the nature of the rain - hard, relatively sparse droplets patterning the smooth surface with neat round imprints. The alliteration of the hard consonant ‘t’ helps to replicate the metallic sound of the rain hitting the boat.
Alliteration and metaphor continue in rich vein in the final line with
roomsized monster and
matchbox brain. The contrast and incongruity of the size of the shark’s enormous body compared with its tiny brain is elegantly portrayed here. The linking alliterative consonant ‘m’ serves to further emphasise the comparison.
There is clever use of long and short vowels in this final line too: the long vowels in
roomsized monster appropriately extend and elongate the expression to reinforce the size of the shark in contrast to the short, clipped vowels of