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There is some effective use of repetitionrepetition: Where a phrase or word is repeated several times to emphasise or make a particular point. in the poem:

  • The "I must scrub and bake and sweep" in line 3 is echoed by the "I must work" in line 9, reinforcing the repetitive, unending nature of her work.
  • Line 10 mirrors line 2, giving a feeling of finality and enclosure to the poem.

'I rise in the dawn, and I kneel and blowTILL THE SEED OF THE FIRE FLICKER AND GLOW.And then I must scrub, and bake, and sweep,Till stars are beginning to blink and peep;But the young lie long and dream in their bedOf the matching of ribbons for bosom and head...AND THE SEED OF THE FIRE GETS FEEBLE AND COLD'

The strong regular rhythmrhythm: The pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables in a line of poetry. emphasises the physical side of the woman's work: the beat falls on "rise", "dawn", "kneel", "blow" in line 1, for example, as if hammering out her tough routine.

There is a lot of alliterationalliteration: Words strung together with repeated (often initial) consonants, eg Max made many men mad. and assonance [assonance: Words that sound the same through the use of similar vowels or consonants, eg hot and slop or fold and filled. ] in the poem. For example:

  • The repeated b and k and p sounds in scrub and bake and sweep (line 3) emphasise how hard and physical the woman's work is
  • The long l sounds in lie long (line 5) help to convey the laziness of the young women.
  • We can hear the girls sighing in the assonance of line 8 - sigh if the wind but lift a tress - while the soft rhyme in lines 7 and 8 - idleness / tress emphasises the gentle way in which they spend their days.

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