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16 October 2014
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Patrick McKiernan
Patrick McKiernan

Hello there. You look nice today. New haircut? anyway my name is Patrick McKiernan and I am a 26yr old Northern Irish fella that loves writing and the BBC of course. I write freelance for a music magazne also which is a great gig but my main passion is creative writing. In my spare time I enjoy watching films both for fun and, thanks to a Film Studies degree, to take the fun out of watching films thanks to picking out technical faults. Thanks education! I also like watching tennis, reading tennis commentary on the BBC website (Piers Newbury is a God) as well as going to gigs and hanging with my good lady and good family. Anything else? Oh yes; I can cook pasta just by staring at it and hold a world record in something or other. Enjoy your day.

Acid In The Sand by Patrick McKiernan

My baby's on the warpath,
i'm heading to the field's camoflage.
I hear her acid heels clicking against the stone,
just us two alone.
I tried to mask the scent of my fear
but it escaped as she drew near,
homing in and loading up.

We pushed ourselves out from our dreams
and over the brink.
Now we're mortal enemies
praying for the hidden link.
And though she has the upper hand
she does'nt know what i've got planned.
I'll turn the stones into sand
and build a castle
to hide from all the hassle
until the wars forgotten,
and the acid heels get left behind
as sunshine falls on the dark path


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