
Matt has been asked to write a a synopsis and first chapter for his novel. Although Minette loves the way Matt writes she thinks he needs to give his work context in the writing rather than explaining it himself. He is praised for his originallity but could make his work less confusing. Can Matt find a clear path to success?
You can download a text version of Minette's feedback here.
Read the synopsis of Matt's book.
Read the opening chapter of Matt's novel.