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Matt Allwright - Episode Four
Matt has been asked to write an action scene with dialogue. Minette likes the lightness and humour in Matt's writing but she's not convinced but some of his descriptions. Minette advises a change of pace to improve his writing.
You can download a text version of Minette's feedback here.
See for yourself what Matt wrote. Should he make it through?
What did Minette think about the other contestants...
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