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Sherrie Hewson - Episode One
Sherrie has been asked to describe a murder ending in a cliff hanger. Minette thinks Sherrie writes from the heart but is her grammar up to scratch?
You can download a text version of Minette's feedback here.
See for yourself what Sherrie wrote. Should she make it through?
What did Minette think about the other contestants...
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