SYNOPSIS OF STORY

It seemed like an ordinary day... but would it actually change my life?

Director - Alex Stevens

My first short film submitted to One-Minute Movies.

YOUR REVIEWS

the man
funny... I liked it, one of the best I've seen here

Ze
Great

tuytgiu
good

Lovely
Good use of fast shots to confuse.

Alfie
Liked the colour, very 70's kitch! Theme was okay! Simple symbolism (quite funny) facial hair is an issue. Credits too long. Otherwise, one minute spent interestingly!

ENG Dept
Liked the Camera Stylo. Not bad. The VO works well.

hatty
well good

somebody
Great idea to use the red scarf. It symbolises the blood brilliantly!

spacemonkey
And?

gazza
liked it. thought the editing works well.

Paul Vortex
Quite camp... wooly editing... nice idea... funny.

kita
wats with the drum roll+credits?

enrico
very vain fellow aren't you!

JoBy
errm, sorry but know i have a terrible headache from the editing. nice idea but you should stick to rules about how many shots per second let alone minutes. concept and storyline ok for a short but get some help in camera work.

rf
a bit ordinary, could make a sequal just an ordinary wednesday.

Brian
I liked this one - short and sweet. agree with Gekko about the drum roll.

the one
Fun to watch

kate
music ok, hair unreal,just getting into it , then wham! is that it?

Gekko.
A serious topic is seriously bent into a 'witty' performance. Not sure the drum roll at the end fitted with the film, even it was funny, which it wasn't. I hated the animated credits as well, they are naff.

Barry
Really enjoyed it, great camera work, cheesy music. Liked the way it sent up the crap gags of most short films

Fred
Funny

JOShUA kANE
please for the sake of credibility and talent - DO NOT SUBMIT ANOTHER ONE MINUTE MOVIE. you are amusing in your own mind and a filmaker to the trash cans of life.

Leigh Smith
Typical Student film. Good idea, poorly edited. If you had a decent editor to cut that - would be 10 times better. Well done though. Keep creating

Lou and andy
'I want that one' 'What, an ordinary tuesday?' 'Yeh' 'But you' said that film was terrible, and it had no point, and there should be more action in the story' 'Yeh I know' 'So whats it to be then?' 'Ordinary Tuesday' 'ok then' later.... 'I dont like it!'

bob
rubbish!

YUKITO
INTERESTING POV SHOTS AND EDITING , BUT NOT A GREAT CLIMAX. IS THERE A PART TWO?

joe hunter
lovely, good use of p.o.v shots and close ups. intriging use of scalf motive

Boris
Genius

Fred 0ne
An impressive work. BRAVO

William Holmes
Pointless

Daf
We like - hilarious. More people with bad facial hair and dodgy taste in music being hit by buses please. For the rest of us, don't forget - stop, look, and listen.

Tony G
I hate happy endings

mart
spent more time on the credits than the movies

david
This had to be a joke, was it?

Liu Shouyi
make a friend

JOHN ELFED HUGHES
The music was good, but that's about it. I think the director could have done much better. Best avoided - 3/10

Calum
cheesy but good

OUR LORD
NO NO NO NO NO NO!!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE THIS IS RUBBISH!! RUBBISH I TELL THEE!!!

Dog Head
Is he really French?

KOI
A masterpiece of indulgence, style, creative wit, wonder and joy. Keep up the red scarfes. KOI

Dave
Great little movie. Like the cheesy music!

hannah x
i don't care wat every1 else says this film is really gud

Emily
Nice film

CAGGY AGG
GOOD, STEVIE SHUT IT PAL.

stevie
utter crap

ANNE
EH EH EHH!

billy
boring, if u are going to do an old theme try to be original

AmPhot
Tremendous! Reminds me of those funny road saftey films they used to show us in school back in the 70s.

Reason
Incredible what can be achieved with a spare afternoon, no ability and no imagination. Bravo.

hannah x
i liked it very much n it reminds me of wen i got knocked down it touched me very deeply

parker
Romaine le what? Lose the poncy beard as well. Bloke with bad facial hair hit by bus and loses scarf. I liked it

James
Liked it-nice editing

Emile
Very fantastic ! You must go on in this way !!

Gary Green Canada
Great little flick with all the components of a story.

Sammy
loved it

y
good editing, pacing

is
funny

Jeremy
Liked the twist at the end - make more films please

Sarah B
Great short

On-Line
Pretty bad I'm afraid. Old theme and not well filmed.

Davey_Boy
Complete and utter tosh I'm afraid.

BIG M
GREAT EDITING - VERY TIGHT.