Richard
Wheres the
benches?
lt
like the idea,
but it should
have been more
planned
BIG M
wow - you are
very clever.
You made one
minute feel
like two
minutes!
Yawn...
Rubber Duck
Nice use of
Tripod.
Rich
I agree with
the train
comments,
they didn't
need to be
there. They
kind of led
away from the
meaning of
the film,
which was
that there is
a park devoid
of life, yet
there are all
these benches
dedicated to
people which
denotes that
it was once a
busy place.
The trains
just
interfered
with that by
showing 'life'
.
Jim Kenny
The trains
were
definitely
NOT a bonus.
They were an
intrusion.
Good idea
with the park
benches, but
some editing
cuts were a
bit too fast -
and maybe a
solo piano
piece (Satie)
rather than an
orchestrated
piece?
Yup,
everyone's a
critic.
Seth Rosenthal
No concept
really...not
from what is
seen anyway
Blurry J
What? What? I
was
expecting a
pop video. In
all fairness I
thought it
was quite
original, I just
think it could
have a better
title.
sugar shorts
the best
photography
so far. not 2
sure about
the content
and story.
Paul
Too many
trains.
They
railroaded
throught the
idea. I
thought that
without the
trains this
would have
been better.
Perhaps slow
fades or slow
zooms in and
out of
photographs
would've had
the movement
needed.
Use of trains
seems opposed
to the
tranquil
nature of the
music and what
I *think* the
film was
trying to say.
Half way there.
Nice to hear
Grieg so often
in these films.
RonDaBomb
I found this
slighly
amusing...i
didnt look at
the story
as "people
like the
park, then
they die"
because not 1
scene other
than the
train bit
shows a
living
being...a
very apt
title indeed
Terry
I thought if
it were'nt
for the train
scene and the
sound given
off by it, it
would not of
been that
effective
Movie Critic
Some good
ideas but not
enuff scenes
of the benches
etc 2 give an
idea of wats
goin on - the
trains looked
they were
about to crash
which was
almost an
unexpected
twist!
Martin
Dissolves
between each
scene would
have worked
better with
this film. I
liked the
train shots
and music
Herman
Bad/good
enough to win
the Turner
prize
Krishin
Quite
touching, but
could be
better with a
lot more
movement.
Trains were
cool, though,
david
what a waste
of a minute
The Graduate
I must say
that there
were a few
good camera
shots, ok 2 or
3.
But i dont
know about
the "people
like the park,
then they die".
If you going
to do a one
minute movie
atleast make
it as
enjoyable for
others as
possible.
One minute is
along time to
waste on
watching
meaningless,
pointless so
called "movies"
.
Isabella
I thought the
1 min film
was really
effective,
the lack of
speech made
the whole
thing quite
powerful and
moving.
Thanks lol!
Ilana Rudnik
I liked the
ambience
created by
the lack of
people in the
park, it was
made more
poignant when
you seen the
names on the
benches.
Although, I
did have to
read the
synopsis and
re-watch it
to fully
understand
the impact it
was making.
Cheers
Ilana
