apple
camera work was good but everthing else lacked any kind of anything even worth commenting on. sorry - no good.

john
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Paul Vortex
Amusing. Music was badly cut... Why did you cut it at all? I hate flatmates... Noone should ever move in with people ever... they are all impossible to live with. Get a wife/husband type person instead. They are almost always so much nicer to live with.

Henry
Slightly disturbing.

Dvae
It was poo

Big Al
Very good.

loo
my dog cud of dun better-grow up

toilet
dat woz sick and da actors r bear ugly

Rolling Stones
Vivie darlin' you need to put a little life in the party, like real SEX!

leigh
dat ids da crappest fing i seen in mi life

William Holmes
Childish toilet humour - revolting!

widget
I liked it, dont know why, but it was ok.

john
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!

meister
only use the one sheet of tracing paper.

GITA
NO BAD WEE FILM BUT WHO THE HELL IS REV ARCHIBALD NICELY?? AND WHO CARES FOR HIS DAFT WANNABE FILM- MAKER IDEAS??? I THINK HE SHOULD "NICELY" KEEP HIS DAFT IDEAS TO HIMSELF!!!

emma
i liked thi film is was really good :)

emma
this was quite a good film i liked it. it was very well done and really cool. shame there was'nt any real sex in it though

hal jeayes
crap

KitLok
poo is cool

The Strokes
flat mates, bumpy mates this gyrates.

Gus Deadman
Bizarre ending, the tension was extreme, and it makes me think of "The descrete charm of the bourgoises" or whatever it's called. Which is a very good thing. Keep it up. The music was good as well.

Steve
Marvellous. I'll look out for the sequel No 2s

Rev Archibald Nicely
Part 2 In some kind miraculous act of love his Latin sweetheart has left him a token of their love... a classic Belicoso direct from Old Havana. Fade to black as he reaches down to enjoy. Comedic 'aaah' over black screen as his dream is shattered. Just an idea... Rev. Archibald Nicely Gorilla Film- maker, like David Attenborough PS. You ARE a film-maker because you've made a film

Rev Archibald Nicely
Part 1 Mildly amusing and a good first draft - up the ante to get more mileage. Maybe the cigar is the last one from his Cuban trip. Flashback to Havana... enjoying a cigar with his Latin belle. Use piece from Hamlet ads but in a Latin style. Flat mate is only a comical figure through pattern glass. >>>This way to the punchline>>> Head still in Havana he exits the loo and WOW!

Toys R Us
Pure genius

tis'me
Wow! gotta say i agree with rainy. is that the best you could come up with?

the saint
annoying music, i dislike smoking anyway so hated the guy rite away, all in all cliched and pants

Boe Selektar
I think this was proper right. Take two flatmates add in a toilet scene.. voila you have a fantastic, frank, frivolous, funny, fine film. And it was good too.

Rainy
Excuse me if I've spelt any of this incorrectly, but I poked my eyes out immediately after watchin. I want that minute of my life back.

Davey_Boy
Ponderous and rather dull.

YUKITO
you're film is on a bbc site, loads of people will see it and give honest (we hope)critism. it was good, well paced and told a story. you are a filmaker, dont let anyone else tell you otherwise.

James Roberts
Not good. Boring subject. Awful 'Musak' style soundtrack. And the shots are all quite boring. The whole thing drags on too long and at only a minute in length that's saying something. For now Vivienne I agree with you, DON'T call yourself a film maker. If you're an aspiring storyteller come up with something worth telling.

a fridge to far
This is ace, anything with toilets in gets my vote. It reminds me of a cross between "rebel without a cause" and episode 34 of Rainbow. Enlarge your ego call yourself a FILMMAKER, theres a lot worse to be called, i can tell you.