mahanda
excellent,
well worth my
minute
Jamie
Really well
done Gareth.
Great
pictures!!!
Dave Wright
Very good,
enjoyed it
thoroughly.
Also glad to
see the
better side
of the
community
offering
constructive
comments -
not just the
lexically
challenged
text-message
based insults
that plague
the other
films so much.
andrew
this is very
nice i like it
well done
Hammertime
I think you
have used this
format
perfectly,
well done.
Dee Day
So what if it
wasn't
perfect, at
least it was
personal and
had some
feeling
Niall
good idea but
tickling was
better. You
could of put
a bit more
emotion into
your
monologue, to
make powrful
imagery.
Simple shots
worked well,
but tickling
had a better
moral
Scot Kenwood
Another very
high quality
piece of
work. Using
stills means
the viewer
has more time
to explore
and absorb
each scene.
It almost
suggests that
moving images
would
distract from
the story.
Encore.
romoane
nice
inteligent
piece and good
use of stills
and narration.
keep up the
good work
aim lo
simplicity
was your
friend and a
bearer of
film quality,
a poigniant
subject
effectively
put together
i reckon.
wolverine
seems you're
starting a new
genre..."still
movies"...the
background
sound was
great...a
great piece of
artistic work
Andrew Paul
Nice film.
Was well
worth a
minute of my
life. To
think the
beeb would
probably pay
somebody
thousands to
come up with
that. Well
Done.
Katherine
I liked it!
Stewarty
Good thread.
Ryano
Worked for me,
well done.
Like the still
image as a
moving image
effect of
zooming in and
out.
Ian Esplin
WOW Great and
just a minute
long
Rrsk
Excellent audio
and image
synchronization
Nick
Yes, very
good. Abrupt
ending?
eep up the
good work.
Ed
It moved me
very emotional
Simon
The first one
minute thingi I
have watched...
very good
llewell
A nice serious
effort - one
of the "all
the gear ...
no idea"
merchants on
this site
should donate
a camcorder.
Kurdish_Princess
Very well
done. It could
pass as a
professional
piece of work.
The use of
image and
sound were
also very
effective.
fuji
not 4 me
thank u
Seth Rosenthal
Good
understanding
of the medium
and shows you
should get
work at the
beeb - if you
don't already
Pushkin
Compelling
story, really
well told.
kevin brown
during the war,
i was shot i
wish it had
been by a
camera for this
short film its
brill
Trigger
Made me think
of me grandad!
I miss him.
Like the use
of images as
stills. Tells
the story as
good as moving
imaged. Great
sound effects!
Marcus
Excellent.
This is how to
tell a story
in 60 seconds.
RonDaBomb
Liked the
film but not
the echoes on
certain vocal
phrases...soun
ds of planes
worked
well...movie
had a sense
of movement
due to the
zooming of
images and
carried a
worthy
message...made
on a scanner
aswell...good
effort
Paul
I like WWII
stories. Every
new one I see
is a new
perspective...
The timing of
the fades, the
framing of the
images - all
look great!
The part of
the "monologue"
featuring
quotes from
the diary
should have
been read by a
second person,
with a darker
tone... with
the Intro and
Outro audio
left as they
are.
Honestly... a
really
enjoyable
short film -
Excellent
timing and
overall use of
canvas.
Ronald Villiers
A touching
film, elegant
and
unpretentious.
In this film
the lack of
visual
movement was
not a handicap.