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  • Message 1. 

    Posted by U14104065 (U14104065) on Wednesday, 24th November 2010

    I hear the words but I see no meaning
    I hear the song but don’t feel the music
    I see the couple but don’t see the love
    I find the place but I don’t feel peace
    I look at the painting but see no story
    I hear a sigh but feel no relief
    I’m on the earth and yet I don’t see no world

    Rehana xx

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  • Message 2

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    Posted by English Host (U1934188) on Thursday, 25th November 2010

    Hey Rehana - I reallylike the symmetry of this work - the way you've got a kind of call and response to it, but with teh twist that the response is never the one you expect to the call.

    I thought it worked really well.

    Don't forget thatmost people ahve now moevd now - Blast is sadly closing, so we've al moved over to Bitesize to continue our discussions...


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