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Posted by cazzie (U12836398) on Tuesday, 16th November 2010
they would not let this be posted over at the writing fourm i wanted to ask people and let them no.
for what i can see from post it looks to me that most people here have GCSES or A level am i write i'm a lot lower so sometimes my messages often are not as clear as they could be i'm sorry about that i often no what i want to write but dont now how to often write it.
I am working at level 1 this means this
level 1 - GCSEs grades D - G
i just started getting in to writing i have written a couple of bits i will post them for you to read.
thanks for listening.
Posted by kim (U13937108) on Tuesday, 16th November 2010
Everyone is working at different levels, you really shouldn't apologise about your writing or whatever. We all have things we struggle with...May I also say that I am really impressed that you've put up your work to improve it, that shows you want to learn and that means you will learn too.
As for the troubles of getting your message across, boy do I understand that. Have you tried bullet pointing you ideas first to get them out of your head and onto paper? Then approaching the piece of writing. If you have the points set out, it might be easier to word it.
From what I've read on bitesize you're doing really well and the difficulties are so easy to fix, I promise you...I hope I haven't been harsh on your work, but like I said over there, I broke it down into things I thought would improve it because it's for school work and maybe by having people point out things to improve, it might help you your next writing task????? I didn't do it to be mean, I swear.
Don't be afraid or embarassed to ask for help on anything either, if you need it, okay..not saying you need it, but that's what Bitesize is there for and what Sandra is really great at. I'm telling you've I've thrown every possible question I can think of at her and she's always had an answer.
Posted by English Host (U1934188) on Wednesday, 17th November 2010
Tee hee - I'm blushing, Kim! Cazzie - we are hearing you over at Bitesize - and desperate to read some of your work. We really are all at different levels - and just because some people have GCSEs doesn't mean that some of us are beginners at creative writing - it's a totally different skill.
I'm looking forward to reading your stuff at the Bitesize forum, but sadly Blast is having to close, - so see you over at Bitesize. Don't worry - we'll be helping you to become a fabulous author - just as we hope you'll be able to help us to do the same thing. Everyone has something to contribute because we all have opinions and we all love reading. Constructive criticism is always welcome, whoever it's from.