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Subject: A537338 - Some like it hot
Posted Jul 4, 2001 by
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The reason for the odd facts in a paragraph at the end is because originally the article was as you can probably tell from previous comments "footnote hell"

The fact that the people supposedly playing instruments clearly had no idea how to play them has always been a tremendous irritation to me (especially as I am a bassist).

I did a lot of research for this article so I have lots of little bits a pieces I can add to it but I have to be careful not to go over the top as it could kill the voice of the article

I'll have a look if I can re-jig the article a little but I have to put a limit on how much I should do as it is clear it will never be an edited article!!!



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Subject: A537338 - Some like it hot
Posted Jul 4, 2001 by
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I don't know what you mean "This will never be an edited article". This is a very good entry and I'm sure it will be picked eventually. Sometimes it can take weeks or even months before the article gets picked. I'd suggest you make one or two more changes and leave it at that. The scouts will wait until things die down in the conversation before they pick it.

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Subject: A537338 - Some like it hot
Posted Jul 4, 2001 by
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I've done some additional research prompted by the latest comment and guess what. SLIH is on stage again! Not only that but Tony Curtis is playing Osgood in it!! They are starting in Las Vegas on july 27th!!




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Subject: A537338 - Some like it hot
Posted Jul 4, 2001 by
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Don't give up - the system is such that a Scout will find your article in Peer Review (which is why it is here in the first place) and recommend it to the Editors for acceptance in the Guide. All this takes quite a while, and, as has been said, they will wait for the conversation to die down to give you time to perfect the article. The Scouts are limited in the number of entries they can recommend per month, and it is often just luck that gets one entry in sooner than another. Then the subeditors get them to work over .... but that's another story.

I like the tidbits at the end of the entry - lots of entries have them. They keep your attention right to the end. The only point I was making was that the year the film is made is a very important piece of information and warrants a mention in the opening lines. Better still, a short tabular summary of the main facts, such as is found in the film/movie sites would also be useful, without affecting the "voice" of the entry at all.

HTH

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Subject: A537338 - Some like it hot
Posted Jul 23, 2001 by
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The sentence beginning with 'There was another scene ...' should also be broken into three or four, but that won't be too difficult to do.

I'd say it's ready for the Guide smiley


Bossel (Scout)

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Subject: A537338 - Some like it hot
Posted Jul 26, 2001 by
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Thanks for your kind comments, Sentence all broken down now!

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Subject: A537338 - Some like it hot
Posted Aug 10, 2001 by
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Yepp smiley

All it needs now is a Scout to recommend it. Fingers crossed smiley

Bossel (Scout without ammo)

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Subject: A537338 - Some like it hot
Posted Aug 13, 2001 by
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Fingers and toes crossed!!!

Thanks for all your help.

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Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review' to 'Some like it hot - The Movie (DANGER SPOILER)'.

This thread has been moved out of the Peer Review Forum because your entry has now been recommended for the Edited Guide.

You can find out what will happen to your entry here: http://www.h2g2.com/SubEditors-Process

Congratulations!

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Subject: Thread Moved
Posted Sep 4, 2001 by
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Well, there we are smiley In contrast to the film title, this bubbly is chilled - hope you'll like it better this way smiley

The next steps for your entry (see the link above) will essentially boil down to ... more waiting, but it's worth it!

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