Posted Nov 26, 2002 by The Apprentice - World Tour (of Stockport)
I'm subbing this entry, so I'm dropping you a line.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/alabaster/A876846
The initial edit is done. Please comment if there is anything you find amiss or disagree with any adjustments.
Otherwise, I'll drop this back to the Editors before the end of the week.
Good entry!
The Apprentice
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Posted Nov 27, 2002 by Pheroneous
Thanks yours. I think I would remove the 'however' in paragraph 5, otherwise, a good job. Thanks again.
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