|  Posted Jan 20, 2004 by Deidzoeb -=- Underguide A1103329 Hi Bob,
The only change I made was to capitalise the word "Yorkshire". I suspect that "metamorphosise" is not a real word, but it's probably funnier that way. I'm going to check with one of the Underguide Editors to find out if we have a policy about adding "referenced entries" links to ones not in the Edited Guide or Underguide. Otherwise, looks finished.
Thanks, Deidzoeb
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 Posted Jan 20, 2004 by Bob McBob
Surpriesed to find metamorphosise isn't a word. Oh, well: never mind. Perhaps you should add a footnote: "metamorphosise is not a word - Ed."
If you want to remove the referenced entries, I've no problems with that.
for editing the entry,
Bob McBob
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 Posted Jan 20, 2004 by Deidzoeb -=- Underguide A1103329 Thanks!
I'll take off the referenced entries, but I'll read them and see if they might be steered toward the Underguide on their own merits.
Later, Deidzoeb
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 Posted Jan 20, 2004 by Deidzoeb -=- Underguide A1103329 I had to look it up. Metamorphose is the verb, metamorphosis is a noun, and when you see more than one of them at the same time, it would be metamorphoses. (Last part pronounced like -ease.)
But if cheese were to "metamorphosise" then I'm afraid that doctors would have to "diagnosise" our problems instead of diagnosing them, and I'd get scared if a doctor told me he was going to give me his "diagnosisation".
However the only thing sillier than a word like "metamorphosise" would be trying to change it to something less funny in an article about training cheese. So I vote to leave it there.
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 Posted Jan 24, 2004 by Traveller in Times >42 )^( _ Traveller in Time on his head "Still one of the most brilliant entries.
I vote to leave the "metamorphosise" as it indeed increases the fiction just enough.
Sorry 'Bob McBob' I have followed the process in the UG but did not reread the article.
The second paragraph in wild Cheese seems 'new' to me. But should ' coordnators ' not be written as ' coordinators '?"
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 Posted Jan 24, 2004 by Bob McBob
, and an for you. It should. Hopefully, Deidzoeb is still subscribed to this and is able to edit it, but if not we'll sort it out somehow....
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 Posted Jan 24, 2004 by Traveller in Times >42 )^( _ Traveller in Time finally changing the Subject "He is, and next last postingss go yesterday, 3days. There is a good chance he will find this one. Did you notice his Zaphodistic art on < A567209 >? I just found it."
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 Posted Jan 24, 2004 by Bob McBob
_Almost_ as good as what you do....
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 Posted Jan 25, 2004 by Deidzoeb -=- Underguide A1103329 Thanks for pointing that out, . I put the "i" in "coordnators."
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