Posted Mar 25, 2003 by Wand'rin star
Nice, comprehensive article marred by "Zeus,who went to Alcmene in disguise" not having a main verb. Take out "who" and read both versions aloud and you'll see what I mean. 
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Posted Mar 25, 2003 by U255
I see what you mean! And I've removed the offending 'who'. Thanks for pointing this out. 
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Posted Mar 25, 2003 by The Dali Llama
time
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Posted Mar 26, 2003 by Wand'rin star
Thanks
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