Great concept for a short film. Must have been painstaking to record texts. I myself have often wondered what mobile networks do with text data? Whether it is stored in giant databases which historians of the future will decipher like hieroglyphics for example l8r=later to gain an understanding of our language and society...

Great work on the animation !
But seriously it was lacking in content.. [not textual though !]

Seemed more like an advert to me !

a fantastic showcase of your talents with the fx work, but i can't help but feel very dissapointed that such a good concept would not actually deliver more than just catching the odd word and therefore deliver no substance. I feels like a trailer for the film you have yet to make.

Nice work on the efx/animation
Although the duration was too short and there was hardly any information for the audience to reason with and understand the concept and meaning of the film.

for me there was enough "exploration of the use of todays technology", it was pretty cool but didnt really grab me.