Tony -

Dark stuff but done very effectively.

Mimimal imagery and good sound design to create a very nasty disturbing mood. A film that surprisingly doesn't require much in the way of actor's performances to get across hatred and fear.


Your synopsis - well, there's more there than is on screen. I'm not sure how important you think the specific details about the time period and nature of Tera's imprisonment/death were - they're more ambiguous than your written description. That isn't a bad thing, just that I don't think the two mesh.

It's a believable premise with overtones of several big movie killer perspectives. Whether it's believable that a killer would spend this much time editing/regrading/audio dubbing a short film for confessional purposes is perhaps the point at which we need to suspend our disbelief!

One technical point: Be careful of "title safe" areas for placing subtitles/text. On the internet we're getting to see the whole frame. But on television, and very possibly on a projected screen, your image will be over scanned. Losing text right on the edge of frame is very probable. Have you action/title safe guides on your edit system? If not, go looking for dimensions on PAL 16:9 frames on the Internet.

Thanks for an intriguing experience.

Ben

This is good
Very dark, quite twisted.
I think it could be better with some shocking imagary, this would give he film more of an edge and keep the viewer interested.
I know we arent all blessed with top notch equipment but i think this film would be brilliant if it were higher quality, or if it was of low quality considering it's style. But i see it is somwhere inbetween.

But good work man, i liked it a lot.

he tasted flesh now he wants more...the making of a seriel killer,...seven,from the killers point of view..good stuff