Thursday 25 August 2011, 13:12
I've been a writer for American TV shows for the last 20 years, and for a British one for about a year. It's like being young again.
My name is Jane Espenson, and if you are a reader of TV "written by" credits, you might have seen that name on shows like Buffy The Vampire Slayer, Angel, The O.C., Gilmore Girls, Firefly, Dollhouse, Battlestar Galactica and Game of Thrones.
I was thrilled when Russell T Davies and Julie Gardner approached me about writing for Torchwood.
Left to right - Rex Matheson (Mekhi Phifer), Esther Drummond (Alexa Havins), Gwen Cooper (Eve Myles) and Captain Jack Harkness (John Barrowman)
Torchwood was simultaneously exactly the kind of show I most like writing for, and unlike anything I'd done.
Writing for a UK showrunner, using a sort of hybrid set of rules and expectations, making a product that had to work in both places - it was amazing and new and exciting.
I got to take the journey with Russell and Julie, who quickly became friends, and with some other amazing writers - John Shiban, John Fay, Ryan Scott - and a dear friend from earlier in my career, the amazing Doris Egan.
The plan was that we would meet as a group only briefly, and then we would all be working individually on our episodes.
But the group was having so much success - and fun - shaping the overall season and collaborating on the stories, that we ended up extending the room work by several weeks.
With 10 episodes telling chapters of one big story, this turned out to be indispensible - we needed to make sure we all knew what the other writers were doing.
Episodes five and six were almost a two-parter, for example, and we had to make sure, in the room, that John Shiban, who was writing six, knew exactly where, emotionally and physically, I was going to be leaving all the characters at the end of episode five.
We all knew the show already, and we were all eager to get our fingerprints on that world.
TV writers sometimes talk about getting to play in a particular sandbox, and that felt really apt in this case.
Torchwood is a show with great characters and deep themes and so many tones and textures. We all wanted to start playing with it right away.
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John Barrowman talks about his character, Captain Jack Harkness, in Torchwood
One of the first things we discussed was how to place Jack at the center of the story.
It was an early decision to reverse his immortality and to play him as a very vulnerable hero for this season.
Suddenly he was the one man in the world who could literally stake his life on the success of the team's actions.
Some other elements fell into place quickly. The family issues for Rex and Gwen and Esther were decided on early, while other things - like the details of the PhiCorp break-in from episode four - took much longer.
When the story breaking was done, the teleplay writing began.
Just getting to type in Jack or Gwen or Rhys as a character name in screenplay format made me laugh with delight.
This, really, is why I'm a TV writer - there is a particular joy in getting to take a character who already exists and trying to find the perfect line that reflects who they are, how they speak, but that also finds something new in them. I love that so much.
Writing Gwen was particularly challenging, of course, because of the Welsh phrasing and syntax.
I didn't do it very well, I think, in the first script where I wrote dialogue for her, but Russell fixed it, and after that I caught on.
I loved writing for her so much. Through my eyes, she is very exotic.
It was a little daunting, writing these iconic characters, but I didn't have any real fear that I would break them.Television is a top-down kind of medium - the showrunner has total control over the final state of the scripts, and I knew Russell would correct me if anything was wrong, which he did on numerous occasions.
Thank you, Russell - you made us all look very smart.
Episode seven was particularly fun for me to write because it has a very different feel than the rest of the season.
Without spoiling too much, I think I can say that it gives new insight into Jack and Gwen.
And all of that adventure was just during the writing.
Now there's a new phase of fun as I'm getting to watch the original and the new fans of the show watch this new season unfold.
I've always loved the way genre fans like to get inside the shows, to really learn not just about the product, but about the process.
Which leads to fun things like live-tweeting, appearing on panels, and even writing this blog entry.
Jane Espenson is a writer on Torchwood. She wrote episodes three, five, seven and co-wrote episodes eight and nine.
Torchwood continues on BBC One on Thursday 15th August at 9pm.
For further programme times, please visit the upcoming episodes page.
Previous episodes of Torchwood are available on iPlayer until Fri 23 September 2011.
Watch an interview with Russell T. Davies for more insights into the making of Torchwood: Miracle Day.
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Friday 26 August 2011, 15:15
Comment number 1.
llarian1825th August 2011 - 16:15
Not to be disrespectful to the new team of writers - I'm sure you're all very good at writing for your respective markets - but I personally feel the heart and soul has been ripped out of Torchwood by re-positioning it for the American market. This is clearly a commercial, rather than creative, decision and the BBC should hang its head in shame for selling out a perfectly respectable home-grown sci-fi action series. The US already produces this genre in spades; the UK's output, however, has traditionally been dire.
I'm currently re-watching Children of Earth and, while it desperately needs the Tosh and Owen characters, it at least has the spirit of the original series. Miracle Day doesn't - it's a throwaway action romp, practically wallpaper. We don't care about the characters or what passes for plot development. When a bright home-grown spark like Torchwood strikes a chord with audiences, why kill it off in this way?
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Comment number 2.
daveac25th August 2011 - 17:33
Well I for one am really enjoying this season although I do feel it's unfolding a little slowly for some.
As to the characters - I do care about them and was very sad about the lost of one of them and I am intrigued what or whom is behind PhiCorp.
Not sure about the need for different versions or edits for the US and the UK - but I suppose it relates to the character of Captain Jack and any possible return of him to Doctor Who.
Cheers, daveac
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interiris25th August 2011 - 22:39
I am dissapointed in the quality of writing fo Miracle Day -i do not know thw past work of the writers so can only go by what has occurred during this production.The dialogue lacks the wit of the previous TW series and the storyline feels overwritten, excessive and lacks credibility.There are too many obvious pot holes,contrived solutions and the charactors are too thinly drawn almost to the point of characture.Alot of the plot devices are repetitious and we have seen them all in the first 3 series and on Dr Who.It lacks subtlety and much of the social commentary lacks depth and intelligent analysis.
It is enjoyable to see Captain Jack back but I feel as if we are going over well worn territory and it would be nice to see his charactor take on some new developements that are not linked to betrayal,guilt and immortality.Gwen has been completly overwritten to the point of tediousness and is no longer believable.It just fails to work as a serious drama or sci fi which is a shame considering the money and talent involved
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Comment number 4.
peter b26th August 2011 - 8:16
Congratulations to the beeb and the team of writers on miracle day. You have managed to turn what was a exciting, inventive, British sci fi series into a cold and turgid, saddening bore. 10 episodes, are you mad BBC? This should of been 4 episodes max, but by aiming for the US market you have taken your eye off the ball and let your core fan base badly down. Captain Jack has lost his cheeky, 'glint in the eye' warmth and become a sexual predator and in doing so, I find myself wishing for his permanent demise. Gwen has turned into a neurotic and tedious and frankly unbelieveable character. I have wasted too much of my time watching this badly written nonsense , which for a true fan of the original torchwood, is desperately dissapointing
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Comment number 5.
OrangeCrush26th August 2011 - 8:57
I'm disappointed that with the pedigree of the writers so many errors are in almost every episode. Some could be solved with simple research or a little fact checking (or a quick call to someone who knows something about chemistry...) while other things like following Jack's timeline are simply embarrassing and point to the real problem. If Russell T. Davies cared about this show he would have done a better job as showrunner. I blame him for letting the fans down.
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