Script Room latest: radio drama

Tuesday 14 May 2013, 11:28

Paul Ashton Paul Ashton


So the readers made a move from comedy to radio drama. ( there’s only so much hilarity you can take in one big chunk.) And we were lucky again (twice in a week, spooky) to have a hugely experienced and knowledgeable BBC colleague – radio drama producer David Hunter - drop by and talk to the readers about how they look at radio scripts and writers for radio. We discussed some very useful headline thoughts:
• Radio scripts should feel easy to read – they should flow, have rhythm, not be too dense or text-heavy – if you’re struggling to read a script then an audience will almost certainly struggle to listen to it
• Producers enjoy seeing a true diversity of worlds, language (as in idiom), tone, style and stories that are representing the whole of the UK as we know it rather than just a little bit
• Stories need to have a contemporaneity about them – even if they are not a contemporary setting, what is it that’s contemporary about the reason for telling the story now, for an audience now? (It’s also very very hard to make ‘period’ pieces come to true engaging, convincing life…)
• Stories need a fresh perspective and you want them to feel in some way ‘adventurous’ – to have a story to tell, to be willing to challenge form (without trying to be clever and ‘innovative’ just for the sake of it)
• Scripts should try to avoid having too many characters – because radio is not the best medium for a multiplicity of voices – and they certainly wouldn’t say no to more strong female protagonists
• Scripts often start with lots of talking, but stories should grab the reader/listener straight away and surprise us straight away – it’s all too easy to turn off/turn over/tune out – so think about how to use sound to hook the attention
• It’s important for the audience/reader to see in the opening minutes/pages why you are passionate about telling this story
• Just because it’s drama, doesn’t mean it can’t be funny, or told with a lightness of touch – the Radio 4 Afternoon Play is a great place for single comedy-dramas, and/or stories that seek to make the audience laugh as well as move them
• Beware overwriting – less is usually more, don’t make the words do all the work, remember that sound/acoustic are your tools/palette
• And: beware farming/agricultural in the Afternoon Play (as it follows The Archers); be careful with what feel like reverent biographies (they can be very dull); be wary of fast-upcoming plays marking memorial/anniversary dates (they will almost certainly already have commissioned an established writer to cover it – so, for example, they already have some huge World War I commissions in the pipeline )


And what did the readers notice when they ploughed into the scripts?
• A large number of plays in which characters sit around chatting a lot (usually over cups of tea) but where nothing really seems to be happening
• Plays (like the above) that get off to a slow start and don’t grab or hook straight away with the story/drama
• Plays with very heavy narration, or with static monologues which relate what has happened rather than exist in a dramatic moment/present
• Plays with little enough in the way of story, narrative and plot
• Plays which didn’t have a strong enough sense of clarity - or clarity of story purpose
• Plays with visual (rather than audio) cues that simply could not work for a radio audience
• Historical stories that don’t seem to have a contemporary imperative/perspective

So, in fact, more or less the converse of what a producer is probably looking for. And as such, a complex set of problems.

And what about the much smaller proportion of ones that are in fact progressing past the first sift? Unanimously, it was where the readers didn’t quite know what was going to happen, but where there was a strong sense of them going somewhere, and where they really wanted to read on to find out where that was. So in a way, there’s something very simple about the urge to say ‘yes’ to a script at this stage.

It’s a tricky thing, this writing business.

Read Paul's blog on the latest script room comedy submissions here.


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    Comment number 3.

    Hang in there Jane. No writer can ever produce a perfect piece of work however much we may aim for it. The fact that you recognise there are things you can improve for next time shows you are willing and able to consider your work critically and that has to be a key feature in what makes a good writer. Now you have embraced this information your work will always benefit from it.

    I know this is easier said than done but I'm convinced that writers who are open to learning are the ones that will produce the best work in the long run. So, while it may not feel like it now, it is a strength to feel as you do.

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    Comment number 4.

    @jane @sophie - I entirely agree, it's always about the next script and the one after that and the one after that - writers don't suddenly become great and stay that way - it's earned and developed and worked at and sweated over and fretted over and despaired at and grappled with and faced up to again and again and again. I've never met a great writer who believes their work to be good enough. Without a sense of honest reflection and doubt (paradoxically coupled with self-belief and ambition), there is really nowhere left to go.

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    Comment number 5.

    My writing partner and I were considering for the next submission window either a play about the Angel of Mons, or a World War II drama involving a prisoner of war camp in England. Given the upcoming smorgasbord of war plays, I guess we really ought to reconsider.

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    Comment number 6.

    @ anthony atkin - if the primary purpose of the submission is to act as a calling card script then it needn't reallly matter what the subject matter is, what matters is how well you execute it - but just be aware that eg a WWI story will be even less likely to ultimately get commissioned. But the truth is that spec scripts are rarely commissioned as such - they intrduce/recommend you but ideas that are commissioned most likely come out of the subsequent conversation that writers have with producers. Whatever you write, write is as well as you can - and never expect a commission to come easily, no matter how strong your writing might be. There's no 'easy' part in the process.

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    Comment number 7.

    i have written a first time script about drugs,debt,loan sharks,gangsters and its funny !
    when are you taking submissions ?


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