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Title: Crazy

by Faisal | in writing, poetry

So many people die
So many people live
But not many people know why
What do we expect from these two legged sins
For I shall tell you the mysteries behind these
When first a crying soul is released from a mother's shelter
It enters a world full of danger
To the day he says his first words
To the day he kill his best friend
Just because he betrayed
A lonely soul who has no friends
And until the day he regrets his mistake
It was too late
For he was dead.

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Got from a film. Just thought, 'why not right a poem about it?' and this is the fist time I have ever written a poem. It took me 5mins so pretty quick. But my poem doesn't really make much sense!


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