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Title: Frail - spoken word

Audio by Krazmaz from Kent | in writing, performance, spoken word

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I've been meaning to write this story for ages, and now I have. Apparently it's depressing...makes a change, eh? Hah!


    • 1. At 6:42pm on 15 Apr 2010, kim wrote:

      I was actually delighting in how wonderfully this was read and also written to really care about the fun stuff in the background. Really excellent writing Krazmaz. It moves beautifully and it is very touching. You can really tell you write a lot, because it reads so very well. I hope you get in with the warhammer lot or whatever it is you want to. Your writing in my opinion is certainly good enough. In fact in my honest opinion ha, it's excellent. Oh and listening to you with earphones is the only way to listen...(not that you need to know that)

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    • 2. At 11:16pm on 15 Apr 2010, Krazmaz wrote:

      Heh, superior sound quality, eh? Much appreciated.

      That Black Library thing excites me. Immensely. I feel like a child again. A child who has to write a daunting amount of stuff this April...

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    • 3. At 2:08pm on 16 Apr 2010, English Host wrote:

      Wow - I confess there was a similar stunned silence at the end of this too. At first I felt sort of cross because I never found out what the son's problem was, but then I began to think about it and realised that it is up to us to work out what happened. Incredible. I can't say I 'enjoyed' it - but it really moved me. Probably my favourite of your stories so far - and I agree with Kim - your slowing down the delivery of this really makes for a far better tale.


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    • 4. At 8:49pm on 16 Apr 2010, Krazmaz wrote:

      Heh, I remember folks asking what was happening to the son and I said that I really didn't know. I chortle.

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    • 5. At 8:10pm on 21 Apr 2010, EOTB wrote:

      Wow. Just... wow. How very, very excellent.

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